06-28-2014, 01:47 AM
(06-25-2014, 09:15 PM)Qdeathstar Wrote: Inspirefirst it seemed very random the content in each stanza.
Another lier.
Set a soul a fire.
Neglect
Another affect.
Ground a grief, a sect.
Seed
another need.
Con and kill and bleed.
Agitate
another hate.
Sell a cell, a fate.
Nest
another jest.
Muck and mire and test.
Engage
another rage.
Turn a tool, a page.
in a second reading it sounds like based on history.
"ground a grief, a sect" sounds nice; makes me think about the institutionalization of habits. ground a grief sounds like a pretty expression.
it cames from somewhere ?
the last verses sounds less impactant than the others. but i think i don't see the meaning in "turn a tool, a page" exactly. turn a page seems not to no fit with "turn a tool". turn a tool makes me think of the modern british navy or something. a page sounds weak, like, that's all a fairy tale.
if i was the writer i 'd put a title in each stanza with a very concrete historical event to guide the reading.
Jesus, Montesquieu, or Karl Marx:
Inspire
Another lier.
Set a soul a fire.
Constantino, Napoleon , Stalin:
Neglect
Another affect.
Ground a grief, a sect.
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