Said the Priest to the Elder
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That does clear things up a bit. However you say you don't want this to be all in favor of the natives, but that
doesn't really come across. So maybe after the priest starts ranting you could write another part where the elder says or does
something that discredits him too?

Anyways, version 2 I like way better Smile
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Said the Priest to the Elder - by metalfan91 - 06-03-2014, 02:42 AM
RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by QDeathstar - 06-03-2014, 03:52 AM
RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by metalfan91 - 06-03-2014, 05:56 AM
RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by QDeathstar - 06-03-2014, 06:49 AM
RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by metalfan91 - 06-03-2014, 02:47 PM
RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by metalfan91 - 06-11-2014, 09:08 AM
RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by nb - 06-12-2014, 08:38 PM
RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by metalfan91 - 06-17-2014, 04:11 AM
RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by Erthona - 06-15-2014, 04:53 AM
RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by stajas - 06-25-2014, 01:08 PM
RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by metalfan91 - 06-26-2014, 08:49 AM
RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by stajas - 06-27-2014, 12:33 AM
RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by metalfan91 - 07-05-2014, 04:53 AM
RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by tomasmk - 06-30-2014, 03:52 AM
RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by metalfan91 - 08-11-2014, 04:09 AM



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