06-26-2014, 12:16 AM
(06-25-2014, 12:45 PM)stajas Wrote: Hello! I'm new to the forums!"Cool" means very little in terms of investment in the English language and nothing at all as useful critique.
OT: Cool, except for some grammatical errors, and the last part. I don't seem to be able to figure that out..
Please try to indicate to the writer where areas of confusion, sparcity of expressive language and those grammatical errors you mentioned in passing, lie. This writer has asked for valid crit...so may you.Welcome and well done for what you have done. Do more.
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