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When Fogs Collide
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06-25-2014, 08:45 AM
An interesting concept well worked, some of the rhymes come across as a little forced but you have plenty to go on by way of an edit so I will leave it at that, you have to keep an eye on them there fogs less the breed like tectakian frogs ;-) best keith
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When Fogs Collide - by Namyh - 06-22-2014, 12:08 AM
RE: When Fogs Collide - by Erthona - 06-22-2014, 11:25 AM
RE: When Fogs Collide - by trueenigma - 06-23-2014, 01:15 AM
RE: When Fogs Collide - by LorettaYoung - 06-23-2014, 09:04 AM
RE: When Fogs Collide - by trueenigma - 06-23-2014, 11:09 AM
RE: When Fogs Collide - by Cherrie666pie - 06-24-2014, 02:51 AM
RE: When Fogs Collide - by Keith - 06-25-2014, 08:45 AM
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