Arrogance? (No Relation)

[tomoffing]

Really enjoyed this one,

Have to echo the comments regarding meter. The switch to pentameter (5 feet) in the final line drags.
Perhaps edit this line to more closely match your predominant meter. The shift in rhyme scheme alone is enough to change the tone slightly.
"Instead, inside I sing and cry
and try but fail to write"

(That's horrific but I hope you get what I mean)

Thanks for the read