Arrogance? (No Relation)

[Cherrie666pie]

I’m working nights with brain-dead oafs
who live to smoke on break;
they’re rough and tumble friendly folks,
but I just can’t relate.

I don’t hack darts or throw my fists
or scrounge for strange between my shifts,
I write and sing and cry inside instead.

This is an awesome poem, I like the first stanza a lot it flows very well. In the last stanza though I think you should rewrite the last line however, it seems a little out of... place? No that's not the right phrasing but I think that it sounds a little bit weird I guess. I think you could definitely improve on that. Otherwise I love the poem(: