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Go On Sad One - A Child’s tale
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06-24-2014, 04:26 AM
This is beautiful. I love the lines "`fore darkness falls, upon your grave" for critiquing this though, I honestly cannot find anything wrong. I love how it reads like a lullaby and how it's kind of dark but not overly depressing. Good job I look forward to seeing more of your writing |
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Go On Sad One - A Child’s tale - by Erthona - 06-12-2014, 01:32 PM
RE: Go On Sad One - A Child’s tale - by billy - 06-12-2014, 03:11 PM
RE: Go On Sad One - A Child’s tale - by Erthona - 06-12-2014, 03:57 PM
RE: Go On Sad One - A Child’s tale - by billy - 06-26-2014, 01:17 PM
RE: Go On Sad One - A Child’s tale - by Erthona - 06-13-2014, 05:25 AM
RE: Go On Sad One - A Child’s tale - by Brownlie - 06-13-2014, 02:43 PM
RE: Go On Sad One - A Child’s tale - by Erthona - 06-14-2014, 05:52 AM
RE: Go On Sad One - A Child’s tale - by LorettaYoung - 06-23-2014, 06:53 AM
RE: Go On Sad One - A Child’s tale - by Cherrie666pie - 06-24-2014, 04:26 AM
RE: Go On Sad One - A Child’s tale - by Erthona - 06-26-2014, 11:08 AM
RE: Go On Sad One - A Child’s tale - by Erthona - 06-27-2014, 12:35 AM
RE: Go On Sad One - A Child’s tale - by Pyxx - 07-04-2014, 09:48 AM
RE: Go On Sad One - A Child’s tale - by Erthona - 07-04-2014, 10:50 AM
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