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06-22-2014, 03:09 AM
(06-22-2014, 02:16 AM)blazekitty14 Wrote: Very edgy, but It has some errors, keep up the good work.In the serious forum, please try to point out some of the errors so the poet can correct them on revision. You need to go a bit further in this particular forum: observation than explanation. Thanks, Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Murder - by ChristopherSea - 06-11-2014, 10:35 PM
RE: Murder - by LorettaYoung - 06-12-2014, 10:29 AM
RE: Murder - by ChristopherSea - 06-12-2014, 06:22 PM
RE: (edit 2) Murder - by LorettaYoung - 06-22-2014, 03:54 AM
RE: Murder - by Erthona - 06-12-2014, 11:41 AM
RE: Murder - by QDeathstar - 06-12-2014, 12:51 PM
RE: Murder - by Cyferz - 06-12-2014, 01:34 PM
RE: Murder - by QDeathstar - 06-12-2014, 09:09 PM
RE: Murder - by ChristopherSea - 06-12-2014, 09:45 PM
RE: (edit 1) Murder - by bena - 06-12-2014, 11:46 PM
RE: (edit 1) Murder - by QDeathstar - 06-13-2014, 12:19 AM
RE: (edit 1) Murder - by ChristopherSea - 06-13-2014, 12:38 AM
RE: (edit 1) Murder - by Erthona - 06-14-2014, 07:47 AM
RE: (edit 1) Murder - by ChristopherSea - 06-16-2014, 06:32 PM
RE: (edit 1) Murder - by trueenigma - 06-14-2014, 11:46 AM
RE: (edit 1) Murder - by LorettaYoung - 06-16-2014, 11:08 AM
RE: (edit 1) Murder - by Tiger the Lion - 06-15-2014, 09:57 AM
RE: (edit 1) Murder - by QDeathstar - 06-17-2014, 12:44 AM
RE: (edit 2) Murder - by theswelter - 06-19-2014, 11:44 PM
RE: (edit 2) Murder - by ChristopherSea - 06-20-2014, 02:53 AM
RE: (edit 2) Murder - by tectak - 06-21-2014, 06:38 PM
RE: (edit 2) Murder - by blazekitty14 - 06-22-2014, 02:16 AM
RE: (edit 2) Murder - by Todd - 06-22-2014, 03:09 AM
RE: (edit 2) Murder - by trueenigma - 06-22-2014, 03:53 AM
RE: (edit 2) Murder - by ChristopherSea - 06-23-2014, 07:16 PM
RE: (edit 2) Murder - by ellajam - 06-28-2014, 03:23 AM
RE: (edit 2) Murder - by ChristopherSea - 07-01-2014, 06:52 PM
RE: (edit 3) Murder - by trueenigma - 07-03-2014, 07:03 AM
RE: (edit 3) Murder - by ChristopherSea - 07-03-2014, 06:12 PM
RE: (edit 3) Murder - by kliS - 07-04-2014, 04:53 AM
RE: (edit 3) Murder - by ChristopherSea - 07-07-2014, 09:40 PM
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