Portrait of a Lost Poet (edit 2)
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You can do what you want. It just seemed to me you needed a longer line to express what you wanted to without have to write tortured phrases. Plus there are the lines which far exceed four feet

"The likes of Shakespeare, Miller, Williams, Sartre (5)
Socially, as if on stage, he flourished words of art" (7)

BU tortured I mean lines like:

"With charm he seeks to stature win."

Just a thought,

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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RE: Portrait of a Lost Poet (edit 1) - by Erthona - 06-21-2014, 08:02 AM
RE: Portrait of a Lost Poet (edit 1) - by Erthona - 06-21-2014, 01:26 PM
RE: Portrait of a Lost Poet (edit 1) - by tectak - 06-21-2014, 11:33 PM
RE: Portrait of a Lost Poet (edit 2) - by tectak - 06-22-2014, 04:29 PM
RE: Portrait of a Lost Poet (edit 2) - by tectak - 06-22-2014, 08:42 PM



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