KerPlunk
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(06-19-2014, 01:23 PM)Wjames Wrote:  He set the ball atop the hill
and watched it roll on down; --Maybe back instead of on it would relate to Sisyphus better.
it hit a rock and then a twig
then stopped on flatter ground.

He took a drink before the bar
and watched his vision blur;
he bounced around inside his mind
then woke up next to her.
Sisyphus is always fun. I'm not so sure about back it might fit the meter. Good Luck.
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KerPlunk - by Wjames - 06-19-2014, 01:23 PM
RE: KerPlunk - by Brownlie - 06-19-2014, 05:13 PM
RE: KerPlunk - by tectak - 06-19-2014, 08:36 PM
RE: KerPlunk - by Tiger the Lion - 06-20-2014, 12:22 PM
RE: KerPlunk - by poe - 06-22-2014, 04:00 AM
RE: KerPlunk - by Erthona - 06-21-2014, 04:53 AM
RE: KerPlunk - by trueenigma - 06-21-2014, 07:20 AM
RE: KerPlunk - by Wjames - 06-22-2014, 02:11 AM
RE: KerPlunk - by tectak - 06-22-2014, 08:58 PM
RE: KerPlunk - by Tiger the Lion - 06-24-2014, 01:11 PM
RE: KerPlunk - by trueenigma - 06-24-2014, 08:50 PM
RE: KerPlunk - by Tiger the Lion - 06-25-2014, 04:07 AM
RE: KerPlunk - by stajas - 06-25-2014, 12:56 PM
RE: KerPlunk - by Wjames - 06-29-2014, 02:57 PM
RE: KerPlunk - by Jwrite - 06-29-2014, 05:04 PM
RE: KerPlunk - by Wjames - 06-30-2014, 03:38 AM
RE: KerPlunk - by ellajam - 06-30-2014, 09:47 PM
RE: KerPlunk - by Alexearth - 07-05-2014, 07:20 PM



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