Six word story
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I understand the placement of the semi-colon. It make sense if read like you are meaning it. I think I get it at least. If you moved it like those above suggested I think the meaning would be different. It's not a lost and found so those words need not be phrased together and the punctuation serperates it perfectly. To me.
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Six word story - by Jae Mc Donnell - 06-10-2014, 03:30 AM
RE: Six word story - by Erthona - 06-10-2014, 03:46 AM
RE: Six word story - by bena - 06-10-2014, 05:23 AM
RE: Six word story - by 71degrees - 06-10-2014, 07:37 AM
RE: Six word story - by John Galt - 06-10-2014, 05:45 PM
RE: Six word story - by Jae Mc Donnell - 06-11-2014, 04:30 AM
RE: Six word story - by milo - 06-11-2014, 06:07 AM
RE: Six word story - by Jimmy Stark - 06-11-2014, 08:02 AM
RE: Six word story - by Joey Automata - 06-11-2014, 10:34 PM
RE: Six word story - by nicksherman - 06-16-2014, 11:35 PM
RE: Six word story - by sandraleigh05 - 06-19-2014, 04:04 PM
RE: Six word story - by billy - 06-19-2014, 05:02 PM
RE: Six word story - by owl_eyes - 06-20-2014, 02:14 AM
RE: Six word story - by Cyferz - 06-20-2014, 12:38 PM



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