06-18-2014, 09:39 AM
Hi, Loretta, please don't delete anything, it is a very interesting thread.
Others have dealt with the technically weak parts that could be worked on if you choose to.
I read it as someone who has the potential for a more creative life than he allows himself. I particularly liked the middle verse.
And I have to put my 2 cents in. When we were kids whenever we accidentally rhymed we'd say "I'm a poet and I didn't even know it."
Others have dealt with the technically weak parts that could be worked on if you choose to.
I read it as someone who has the potential for a more creative life than he allows himself. I particularly liked the middle verse.
And I have to put my 2 cents in. When we were kids whenever we accidentally rhymed we'd say "I'm a poet and I didn't even know it."
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