06-18-2014, 07:30 AM
(06-16-2014, 12:54 PM)Erthona Wrote: Happy Father’s DayThe third stanza is quite awkward. She "was" turning them into sluts? Has she stopped? This whole story is old. I do like the first line, but nothing special is happening after that. He said, she said. Sorry.
I was a father once,
until my ex-wife and the courts took
my girls away.
The court said, they don’t need
your presence, they just need
you to pay.
My ex-wife who was turning them
into amoral sluts said, "Just hand over the money,
you've nothing of worth to say.
It's just like turning a trick,
so make it quick, dump your load,
and have a nice day."
I was a father once, now I’m just a
John who pays to get screwed, so don’t tell me,
“Happy Father’s Day!”
–Erthona
©2011-14

