Don't tell me Happy Father's Day
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(06-16-2014, 12:54 PM)Erthona Wrote:  Happy Father’s Day

I was a father once,
until my ex-wife and the courts took
my girls away.

The court said, they don’t need
your presence, they just need
you to pay.

My ex-wife who was turning them
into amoral sluts said, "Just hand over the money,
you've nothing of worth to say.

It's just like turning a trick,
so make it quick, dump your load,
and have a nice day."

I was a father once, now I’m just a
John who pays to get screwed, so don’t tell me,
“Happy Father’s Day!”



–Erthona




©2011-14
The third stanza is quite awkward. She "was" turning them into sluts? Has she stopped? This whole story is old. I do like the first line, but nothing special is happening after that. He said, she said. Sorry.
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Don't tell me Happy Father's Day - by Erthona - 06-16-2014, 12:54 PM
RE: Don't tell m Happy Father's Day - by Brownlie - 06-16-2014, 01:14 PM
RE: Don't tell me Happy Father's Day - by Erthona - 06-18-2014, 02:10 AM
RE: Don't tell me Happy Father's Day - by 71degrees - 06-18-2014, 07:30 AM
RE: Don't tell me Happy Father's Day - by billy - 06-18-2014, 10:11 AM
RE: Don't tell me Happy Father's Day - by bena - 06-19-2014, 07:04 AM



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