06-17-2014, 09:45 PM
Dale, If you are the narrator, sorry that you don't have a better relationship with the Ex and your girls. However, I would not blame the children for the Ex's shortages. Perhaps you could turn this sentence about on her:
'My ex-wife who was turning them
into amoral sluts said,...'
with something more like:
'My slutty amoral ex-wife
who was raising them said,...'
or something in that vein which may serve you better and place the narrator's anger against the Ex and not the girls themselves.
Cheers/Chris
'My ex-wife who was turning them
into amoral sluts said,...'
with something more like:
'My slutty amoral ex-wife
who was raising them said,...'
or something in that vein which may serve you better and place the narrator's anger against the Ex and not the girls themselves.
Cheers/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris

