Don't tell me Happy Father's Day
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Dale, If you are the narrator, sorry that you don't have a better relationship with the Ex and your girls. However, I would not blame the children for the Ex's shortages. Perhaps you could turn this sentence about on her:

'My ex-wife who was turning them
into amoral sluts said,...'

with something more like:

'My slutty amoral ex-wife
who was raising them said,...'

or something in that vein which may serve you better and place the narrator's anger against the Ex and not the girls themselves.

Cheers/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Don't tell me Happy Father's Day - by Erthona - 06-16-2014, 12:54 PM
RE: Don't tell m Happy Father's Day - by Brownlie - 06-16-2014, 01:14 PM
RE: Don't tell me Happy Father's Day - by ChristopherSea - 06-17-2014, 09:45 PM
RE: Don't tell me Happy Father's Day - by Erthona - 06-18-2014, 02:10 AM
RE: Don't tell me Happy Father's Day - by billy - 06-18-2014, 10:11 AM
RE: Don't tell me Happy Father's Day - by bena - 06-19-2014, 07:04 AM



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