Uncle Beige
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I really liked your poem, and the thoughts it contains.

Loved the colour and texture of the first 2 lines, the dog with whisky eyes, the homesteader cabins and much more.

I like the way you left "leg" our after "hind."

Thanks for the read. JG
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Uncle Beige - by theswelter - 06-17-2014, 11:29 AM
RE: Uncle Beige - by John Galt - 06-17-2014, 06:34 PM
RE: Uncle Beige - by theswelter - 06-17-2014, 08:02 PM
RE: Uncle Beige - by ChristopherSea - 06-17-2014, 09:26 PM
RE: Uncle Beige - by theswelter - 06-17-2014, 09:46 PM
RE: Uncle Beige - by Tiger the Lion - 06-17-2014, 10:38 PM
RE: Uncle Beige - by theswelter - 06-17-2014, 10:49 PM



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