Father's Day Poem
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please guys, if you're going to ask a question such as this; at least give feedback

does the meter work?
what meter do you think it is?
does the poem work?
why does it work? why doesn't it work?

as for the follow up i don't think she mentioned meter and not all poetry uses the thing.
feedback first, question during or at the end. /mod
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Messages In This Thread
Father's Day Poem - by fim - 06-14-2014, 09:12 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by LorettaYoung - 06-15-2014, 07:06 AM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by fim - 06-15-2014, 05:28 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by billy - 06-15-2014, 06:07 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by just mercedes - 06-15-2014, 07:25 AM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by fim - 06-16-2014, 08:11 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by billy - 06-15-2014, 10:53 AM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by fim - 07-07-2014, 05:31 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by crow - 06-17-2014, 01:45 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by billy - 06-17-2014, 04:25 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by crow - 06-18-2014, 03:12 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by crow - 06-18-2014, 06:36 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by bena - 06-19-2014, 06:37 AM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by LorettaYoung - 06-19-2014, 12:38 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by crow - 07-07-2014, 07:20 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by fim - 07-10-2014, 04:27 AM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by Forever*young - 08-30-2014, 08:45 AM



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