06-17-2014, 12:44 AM
I think one thing to consider when making your edits is that right now, as it stands you are inspiring a lot of people to put their own little twist on the poem, eg: the poem is interesting and thought provoking.
If you edit it too much or make it too smooth you might loose some of that.
If you edit it too much or make it too smooth you might loose some of that.

