06-15-2014, 11:59 PM
I appreciate the structure of line two, as it appears to be a construction I often use.
I will lead with a salient adjective followed by a comma, followed by a phrase (in your case a verb phrase) that elucidates said saliency.
After another reading I wonder whether this is instead a "stand alone" noun phrase such as "futile clawing(s) on the wall"
I will lead with a salient adjective followed by a comma, followed by a phrase (in your case a verb phrase) that elucidates said saliency.
After another reading I wonder whether this is instead a "stand alone" noun phrase such as "futile clawing(s) on the wall"