(06-15-2014, 07:06 AM)LorettaYoung Wrote: Hi Film; Happy Father's Day tomorrow; your sentiments indicate that your mind looks into the deeper things. But, to be honest, nice words, but not a poem. You tried, that was good. I am in a similar boat; there are really good teaching sites that will tell you what you need to do. Good luck, Lorettato say "not a poem" is not critique or fair feedback. we are not here to tell people to go to a teaching site for poetry. please keeps feedback to the poem /mod
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Father's Day Poem - by fim - 06-14-2014, 09:12 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by LorettaYoung - 06-15-2014, 07:06 AM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by fim - 06-15-2014, 05:28 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by billy - 06-15-2014, 06:07 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by just mercedes - 06-15-2014, 07:25 AM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by fim - 06-16-2014, 08:11 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by billy - 06-15-2014, 10:53 AM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by fim - 07-07-2014, 05:31 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by crow - 06-17-2014, 01:45 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by billy - 06-17-2014, 04:25 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by crow - 06-18-2014, 03:12 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by crow - 06-18-2014, 06:36 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by bena - 06-19-2014, 06:37 AM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by LorettaYoung - 06-19-2014, 12:38 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by crow - 07-07-2014, 07:20 PM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by fim - 07-10-2014, 04:27 AM
RE: Father's Day Poem - by Forever*young - 08-30-2014, 08:45 AM
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