06-15-2014, 02:38 PM
Paul,
"if I don't tenderize it,
to make it food of joy."
"I will stay hunger,
and not thirst." I agree this is a non-sequitur.
The penultimate line should be the last line.
"that nourishment is not palatable,
so I will stay hunger!"
Dale
"if I don't tenderize it,
to make it food of joy."
"I will stay hunger,
and not thirst." I agree this is a non-sequitur.
The penultimate line should be the last line.
"that nourishment is not palatable,
so I will stay hunger!"
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.