06-14-2014, 08:17 AM
what is "futile" "clawing on the walls?" Do you mean futilely?
"Floors coated with
chipped fingernails and vomit."
"Parents vainly protecting children,
fearing they'll die first"
Maybe
"Parents protect their children in vain, fearing they will dies first".
While admirable, this is a well worn theme and I don't see much new in your rendition. In fact I saw one about the holocaust on this site not long ago. Seems like it was in the write a poem a day in April thing.
Dale
"Floors coated with
chipped fingernails and vomit."
"Parents vainly protecting children,
fearing they'll die first"
Maybe
"Parents protect their children in vain, fearing they will dies first".
While admirable, this is a well worn theme and I don't see much new in your rendition. In fact I saw one about the holocaust on this site not long ago. Seems like it was in the write a poem a day in April thing.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.