Setting the table (first edit )
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Thank you Billy. I really want the first line to be like an introduction, an intentionally long line. But you made me think, it doesn't really have that effect unless all the other lines are kept more trim. I think that was Dale's concern with the scrambled line lengths too. Still juggling the comments before attempting a rewrite.
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RE: Setting the table - by ellajam - 06-11-2014, 11:45 PM
RE: Setting the table - by Tiger the Lion - 06-12-2014, 06:37 AM
RE: Setting the table - by ellajam - 06-12-2014, 06:46 AM
RE: Setting the table - by Tiger the Lion - 06-12-2014, 09:47 AM
RE: Setting the table - by Erthona - 06-12-2014, 11:30 AM
RE: Setting the table - by billy - 06-12-2014, 03:35 PM
RE: Setting the table - by Tiger the Lion - 06-13-2014, 01:31 PM
RE: Setting the table - by tmanzano - 06-16-2014, 01:10 AM
RE: Setting the table - by Tiger the Lion - 06-16-2014, 10:11 AM
RE: Setting the table - by jakesalive86 - 06-16-2014, 01:54 AM
RE: Setting the table - by 71degrees - 06-16-2014, 11:06 AM
RE: Setting the table - by Tiger the Lion - 06-16-2014, 11:55 AM
RE: Setting the table - by Tiger the Lion - 07-21-2014, 09:27 AM
RE: Setting the table (first edit ) - by ellajam - 07-21-2014, 10:47 AM
RE: Setting the table (first edit ) - by Wjames - 01-01-2015, 04:09 AM



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