Doll Parts
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I read this like a short story the first time, more like a poem after re-reading. Great story many can relate to, told in a unique way. If anything, I felt myself wanting more description, I Juana know what the apartment smelled like. I Juana know if the floors creaked.
Great read, thanks.
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Doll Parts - by rowens - 06-07-2014, 04:34 AM
RE: Doll Parts - by ellajam - 06-07-2014, 05:35 AM
RE: Doll Parts - by QDeathstar - 06-07-2014, 05:38 AM
RE: Doll Parts - by rowens - 06-07-2014, 05:46 AM
RE: Doll Parts - by LorettaYoung - 06-12-2014, 06:10 AM
RE: Doll Parts - by rowens - 06-13-2014, 03:16 AM
RE: Doll Parts - by justcloudy - 06-13-2014, 07:30 AM
RE: Doll Parts - by just mercedes - 06-13-2014, 07:45 AM
RE: Doll Parts - by Erthona - 06-13-2014, 09:45 AM
RE: Doll Parts - by QDeathstar - 06-13-2014, 12:18 PM
RE: Doll Parts - by Tiger the Lion - 06-13-2014, 01:01 PM
RE: Doll Parts - by rowens - 06-19-2014, 02:52 AM



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