06-13-2014, 07:30 AM
I read this a couple days ago and it has stuck in my mind as clearly as if it were something I saw on TV. That's a good thing. It's an awkward and unfulfilling story, but it has a draw to it. I don't think it should be longer, that might ruin the effect. And you rarely change anything (or at least don't post edits) so I guess that's for the best.
-jc
-jc
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.