Murder

[QDeathstar]

I think the edit makes things lot clearer. I think I like the last stanza very much, but the set up for it is still kind of awkward. "Inviting death into our home", while clearer leaves more questions. Did he trick you?


"Death encouraged by our slow decay
Tapped on our door soliciting
autonomy, a nascent leaf in life,
an algal bloom of possibilities."

Perhaps


I'm fine with dilating night...