Go On Sad One - A Child’s tale

[billy]

is it the death of a child?
i'm not sure what the form is, is it a lament...it reads a little like a lullaby but i'm not so good on forms. i kept wanting to see another syllable on the last line of each verse. i think the nature of the form dictates a lot of the small words but i wonder if you could change a few of them for some that are more substantial. i was also surprised not to see the go on line start every other verse.

thanks for the read.