Doll Parts

Doll Parts

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06-12-2014, 06:10 AM

Hi Rowens: to me this reads like a good short story; that being said
we know that prose can have the sense of poetry. You wanted to show Juan as he was at that moment; but you could continue and bring out a personality. Thanks for the read. Loretta

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Doll Parts - by rowens - 06-07-2014, 04:34 AM

RE: Doll Parts - by ellajam - 06-07-2014, 05:35 AM

RE: Doll Parts - by QDeathstar - 06-07-2014, 05:38 AM

RE: Doll Parts - by rowens - 06-07-2014, 05:46 AM

RE: Doll Parts - by LorettaYoung - 06-12-2014, 06:10 AM

RE: Doll Parts - by rowens - 06-13-2014, 03:16 AM

RE: Doll Parts - by justcloudy - 06-13-2014, 07:30 AM

RE: Doll Parts - by just mercedes - 06-13-2014, 07:45 AM

RE: Doll Parts - by Erthona - 06-13-2014, 09:45 AM

RE: Doll Parts - by QDeathstar - 06-13-2014, 12:18 PM

RE: Doll Parts - by Tiger the Lion - 06-13-2014, 01:01 PM

RE: Doll Parts - by rowens - 06-19-2014, 02:52 AM

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