Critique
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(06-11-2014, 11:46 PM)Erthona Wrote:  
Quote:SG wrote: *shakes fist at the screen*
Hysterical

"avocational hazard" What kind of sign represents that? Is it a little guy, in a little car running into a giant pen, and blowing out his tire on the nib? Smile


dale the avocate (is too, I looked it up and found it in the "Webster's Revised Unabridged Dictionary", so there Tongue)
Nah, it's the woman tripping and being lobotomized by the giant pen.
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Critique - by Erthona - 06-11-2014, 12:32 AM
RE: Critique - by Todd - 06-11-2014, 02:05 AM
RE: Critique - by Erthona - 06-11-2014, 02:14 AM
RE: Critique - by Tiger the Lion - 06-11-2014, 06:34 AM
RE: Critique - by ellajam - 06-11-2014, 06:50 AM
RE: Critique - by rayheinrich - 06-11-2014, 11:42 AM
RE: Critique - by ellajam - 06-11-2014, 10:40 PM
RE: Critique - by Erthona - 06-11-2014, 01:11 PM
RE: Critique - by bena - 06-11-2014, 10:28 PM
RE: Critique - by Erthona - 06-11-2014, 11:46 PM
RE: Critique - by ellajam - 06-12-2014, 12:44 AM
RE: Critique - by bena - 06-12-2014, 12:22 AM
RE: Critique - by Erthona - 06-12-2014, 09:56 AM
RE: Critique - by bena - 06-13-2014, 05:17 AM
RE: Critique - by loocerie - 07-09-2014, 11:33 PM
RE: Critique - by tectak - 07-10-2014, 12:00 AM
RE: Critique - by Erthona - 07-10-2014, 07:11 AM
RE: Critique - by Leanne - 07-10-2014, 10:03 AM
RE: Critique - by Erthona - 07-10-2014, 08:40 PM



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