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[ellajam]

ella-- it's the "monk" that doesn't work for me. The idea works but it should be a beggar's cup or something I think. No? I just can't imagine monks going around begging with cups, that's all.

You're right, I have an image in mind from somewhere of them with cups, actually bowls, but I think it's for food. Can rhymes rattle like grains of rice in a monk's cup? Maybe they can swirl, thanks, I'll think on it. I love the rhyme of monk's cup/funk it up, I'll try to make it work. Hey know of anything special they might drink? Off to research what they might brew.