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[milo]

Edit#1-
The silver-tongued Church bells
that murmur like a mist
gather in the hearts of worshipers,
but lift from the breast
of an Atheist.

"silver-tongued" is a cliche and a doozy at that.
bells murmuring is about as pointless as mist murmuring.
bells gathering in hearts is just too twee to be written seriously.

Overall, I think you know what you want to say but you are being too coy. Try abandoning what you want to say and go for interesting instead.