06-11-2014, 04:30 AM
Thank you all for your replies and your thoughts, they are all much appreciated.
I know for such a piece I should really leave it up to the reader to decide the meaning, but as this is for critique I will give some background on what I was thinking.
I live in Ireland and recently a story came out about two kids who found a mass burial of children in a septic tank in west Ireland. Maybe you heard about it? A real horrific story, but this is just the start of the list of horrors perpetrated on the Irish state under the Catholic regime. So I was also getting at a lot more.
As for the colon that was a misprint.
I know for such a piece I should really leave it up to the reader to decide the meaning, but as this is for critique I will give some background on what I was thinking.
I live in Ireland and recently a story came out about two kids who found a mass burial of children in a septic tank in west Ireland. Maybe you heard about it? A real horrific story, but this is just the start of the list of horrors perpetrated on the Irish state under the Catholic regime. So I was also getting at a lot more.
As for the colon that was a misprint.