06-10-2014, 10:46 AM
I agree with QDS, in that the church bells might be better "clanging in the mist" rather than "murmer like a mist".
Also, I would prefer "brass-tongued" for a number of reasons: it's a lot less cliche, also the word brass has a nice connotation of conceit that might work here. Thirdly, the actual tongue of a church bell is often brass. If this is the complete opposite of your intent, sorry.
That said, I like it very much, Paul
Also, I would prefer "brass-tongued" for a number of reasons: it's a lot less cliche, also the word brass has a nice connotation of conceit that might work here. Thirdly, the actual tongue of a church bell is often brass. If this is the complete opposite of your intent, sorry.
That said, I like it very much, Paul