06-10-2014, 03:46 AM
Do you need a colon after "lost". maybe after found instead. I'm assuming this alludes to Milton's two poem, "Paradise Lost" and "Paradise Regained". The "children's remains" has a nice ambiguity about it. This is one of the few times not putting a period at the end of a sentence is justified, as it keeps it open-ended.
Good work in a small space.
Dale
Good work in a small space.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.