Tidal Serge-a tribute. edit 0.0001 tiger, leanne
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I like the play on his name in the title and body. However, that inversion 'but no bore he' is a stretch for a rhyme Tom. What about something like, 'never weary'.

PS: Now that we know a permanent banning means death, most should be on their best behavior. Confused I never met the man or poet, but remember him, as he was banned the week I joined. Perhaps we could have a moment of unbanning in his honor.
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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RE: Tidal Serge-a tribute. - by LorettaYoung - 06-07-2014, 04:28 AM
RE: Tidal Serge-a tribute. - by tectak - 06-07-2014, 04:49 AM
RE: Tidal Serge-a tribute. - by Tiger the Lion - 06-07-2014, 07:23 AM
RE: Tidal Serge-a tribute. - by Leanne - 06-07-2014, 07:23 AM
RE: Tidal Serge-a tribute. - by tectak - 06-07-2014, 02:10 PM
RE: Tidal Serge-a tribute. edit 0.0001 tiger, leanne - by ChristopherSea - 06-10-2014, 01:39 AM



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