Good Morning London
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(06-07-2014, 03:01 AM)poe Wrote:  This observational poem is refreshing next to the plethora expressive works. I'm a New Yorker lately feeling the bug to travel. I feel as if I've done that now, for a spell. Been to London, look forward to getting back some day. Would you say why you took out the last stanza?
poe
Hi Poe Thank you for the kind comments, I wasn't that happy with the last stanza so I moved it up one and added another I was trying to show how quick the pace is on the streets, Many thanks Keith

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Good Morning London - by Keith - 05-29-2014, 10:18 AM
RE: Good Morning London - by ChristopherSea - 05-29-2014, 06:27 PM
RE: Good Morning London - by Keith - 05-30-2014, 04:44 AM
RE: Good Morning London - by tectak - 05-29-2014, 10:06 PM
RE: Good Morning London - by poe - 06-07-2014, 03:01 AM
RE: Good Morning London - by Keith - 06-09-2014, 07:59 AM
RE: Good Morning London - by Keith - 06-11-2014, 06:24 AM
RE: Good Morning London - by abu nuwas - 06-11-2014, 08:45 AM
RE: Good Morning London - by abu nuwas - 06-09-2014, 09:03 AM
RE: Good Morning London - by LorettaYoung - 06-12-2014, 06:17 AM
RE: Good Morning London - by Keith - 06-21-2014, 07:35 PM
RE: Good Morning London - by aramsey - 06-20-2014, 01:45 AM



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