06-09-2014, 07:59 AM
(06-07-2014, 03:01 AM)poe Wrote: This observational poem is refreshing next to the plethora expressive works. I'm a New Yorker lately feeling the bug to travel. I feel as if I've done that now, for a spell. Been to London, look forward to getting back some day. Would you say why you took out the last stanza?Hi Poe Thank you for the kind comments, I wasn't that happy with the last stanza so I moved it up one and added another I was trying to show how quick the pace is on the streets, Many thanks Keith
poe
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out

