My first poem, feedback much appreciated

[Tiger the Lion]

Welcome Casper, I am new here myself. I've written similar poems to yours more recently than I want to admit. But I came here to improve and I am. I think you've had some great crits already. The are problems with grammar and punctuation etc., but we all experience that. If you are writing as therapy, I recommend just letting the words come out. Don't look for rhymes or rhythm too soon. They sometimes get in the way of the feeling.
Thanks for the read, Paul