06-09-2014, 06:20 AM
Hi Jack - for me, 'gored' is an action of animal horns or tusks - not teeth or claws. I like the way your final line can refer to both the dead fox and the pattern of sunlight.
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RE: Hunting haiku - by heslopian - 06-04-2014, 11:24 PM
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RE: Hunting haiku - by just mercedes - 06-09-2014, 06:20 AM
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