Commuting (Edit 1.1)

Commuting (Edit 1.1)

justcloudy Offline

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#15

06-08-2014, 11:19 PM

I definitely liked the changes to L5-6 in the edit. "Monk's cup" strikes me wrong, I think that line could be revised a bit. But really enjoyed this fun little one that we can all relate to!

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Commuting (Edit 1.1) - by ellajam - 05-31-2014, 08:44 PM

RE: Commuting - by Brownlie - 05-31-2014, 09:03 PM

RE: Commuting - by ellajam - 05-31-2014, 09:24 PM

RE: Commuting - by LorettaYoung - 06-06-2014, 12:41 PM

RE: Commuting - by Erthona - 06-01-2014, 03:01 AM

RE: Commuting - by Brownlie - 06-01-2014, 06:04 AM

RE: Commuting - by ellajam - 06-01-2014, 06:52 AM

RE: Commuting - by Namyh - 06-06-2014, 08:18 AM

RE: Commuting - by ellajam - 06-06-2014, 09:04 AM

RE: Commuting - by QDeathstar - 06-06-2014, 01:12 PM

RE: Commuting (Edit) - by ellajam - 06-07-2014, 06:03 AM

RE: Commuting (Edit) - by kindofahippy - 06-08-2014, 12:36 AM

RE: Commuting (Edit) - by Brownlie - 06-08-2014, 02:19 PM

RE: Commuting (Edit) - by QDeathstar - 06-08-2014, 03:34 PM

RE: Commuting (Edit) - by justcloudy - 06-08-2014, 11:19 PM

RE: Commuting (Edit) - by bena - 06-09-2014, 04:52 AM

RE: Commuting (Edit) - by Joey Automata - 06-11-2014, 11:05 AM

RE: Commuting (Edit) - by ellajam - 06-11-2014, 08:00 PM

RE: Commuting (Edit) - by justcloudy - 06-11-2014, 08:47 PM

RE: Commuting (Edit) - by ellajam - 06-11-2014, 08:58 PM

RE: Commuting (Edit) - by bena - 06-11-2014, 10:22 PM

RE: Commuting (Edit) - by ellajam - 06-11-2014, 10:25 PM

RE: Commuting (Edit) - by ChristopherSea - 06-11-2014, 10:29 PM

RE: Commuting (Edit) - by ellajam - 06-11-2014, 10:37 PM

RE: Commuting (Edit 1.1) - by ellajam - 06-12-2014, 06:41 AM

RE: Commuting (Edit 1.1) - by justcloudy - 06-12-2014, 07:23 AM

RE: Commuting (Edit 1.1) - by outcast - 06-12-2014, 08:43 AM

RE: Commuting (Edit 1.1) - by ellajam - 06-12-2014, 08:55 AM

RE: Commuting (Edit 1.1) - by billy - 06-12-2014, 09:20 AM

RE: Commuting (Edit 1.1) - by ellajam - 06-12-2014, 10:28 AM

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