Tree Haiku
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(Edit: thanks, just mercedes, Erthona, and John Galt)

Soaking up moonlight,
the ancient oak waits for rain.
Thunderstorms approach.

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An old man looks up
as cottonwood leaves tremble;
the rain dance begins.

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Leaves dance,
while roots sing;
A summer shower.



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(Original Version)

An old man looks up
as cottonwood leaves tremble;
the rain dance begins.

Soaking up moonlight,
the ancient oak waits for rain.
Lightning approaches.

Leaves dance,
while roots sing;
A summer shower.
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Messages In This Thread
Tree Haiku - by Markworth - 06-08-2014, 08:59 AM
RE: Tree Haiku - by just mercedes - 06-08-2014, 09:01 AM
RE: Tree Haiku - by Markworth - 06-08-2014, 09:09 AM
RE: Tree Haiku - by Erthona - 06-08-2014, 11:36 AM
RE: Tree Haiku - by Markworth - 06-08-2014, 12:29 PM
RE: Tree Haiku - by John Galt - 06-08-2014, 05:27 PM
RE: Tree Haiku - by Markworth - 06-08-2014, 10:25 PM



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