06-08-2014, 06:53 AM
As this is in poetry for fun, I won't critique, although I have to ask, why did you use "Couchant" instead of "crouched", and why did you change from three lines per stanza to four line per stanza. I am unfamiliar with the phrase "the tyrants three".
Dale
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.