Barren
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Once fertile fields
that shouldered cloaks of drought.
now grow hunger.

Their loam enticed away
by waspish dust devils.

Yellow buttercups and African violets
dress the last sun-bleached page
of a children’s book,

all that’s left.
3rd edit. thanks peops Smile

Quote:The fields once fecund
shoulder cloaks of drought.
now grow hunger.

The loam enticed away
by waspish dust devils.

Yellow corn and African violets
dress the last sun-bleached page
of a children’s book.

All that’s left.

a first edit.
thanks to addy and co for their feedback.

Quote:Original;

The fields, once fercund
shoulder their dusty cloaks of drought.
now they grow hunger .

The loam enticed away
seduced by dancing dust devils


Yellow corn and African violets
dress the last sun-bleached page
of a children’s book.
All that’s left
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Messages In This Thread
Barren - by billy - 03-29-2010, 02:44 AM
RE: Barren - by jdelacroix - 03-29-2010, 01:28 PM
RE: Barren - by billy - 03-29-2010, 04:20 PM
RE: Barren - by addy - 03-30-2010, 02:47 PM
RE: Barren - by billy - 03-30-2010, 05:04 PM
RE: Barren - by Philatone - 10-25-2012, 10:31 AM
RE: Barren - by just mercedes - 10-25-2012, 01:31 PM
RE: Barren - by billy - 10-25-2012, 01:53 PM
RE: Barren - by Keith - 10-26-2012, 04:12 AM
RE: Barren - by billy - 10-26-2012, 11:55 AM



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