06-07-2014, 02:10 PM
(06-07-2014, 07:23 AM)Leanne Wrote: Serge and I didn't always get on, but his was a genuine talent and a mind worth remembering. He was a man of complicated passions and the world is richer for his life.Yes, he was a hard act to follow alrighty. You and another are right about that last ellipsis. I don't know why it was there. Wot speling mustake?
I fixed your spelling mistake but I do think you should reconsider some of the ellipses. Though they are Serge-like, they are not necessarily Tom-writing-about-Serge-like. Love the last line!
Best,
Tom