06-07-2014, 12:26 PM
Thank you for reading. I like the ambiguity in the poem. I feel like you got what i wanted you to get out of the poem.
There is an extreme distance from emotion in the poem. I tried to get inside the head of an active shooter in a rampage with this poem... You hear all the time about how "they were picked on" (angst and hurt pride) and how emotionless they were in the act... I tried to capture some of that.
There is an extreme distance from emotion in the poem. I tried to get inside the head of an active shooter in a rampage with this poem... You hear all the time about how "they were picked on" (angst and hurt pride) and how emotionless they were in the act... I tried to capture some of that.