Serge and I didn't always get on, but his was a genuine talent and a mind worth remembering. He was a man of complicated passions and the world is richer for his life.
I fixed your spelling mistake but I do think you should reconsider some of the ellipses. Though they are Serge-like, they are not necessarily Tom-writing-about-Serge-like. Love the last line!
I fixed your spelling mistake but I do think you should reconsider some of the ellipses. Though they are Serge-like, they are not necessarily Tom-writing-about-Serge-like. Love the last line!
It could be worse