06-06-2014, 12:15 PM
(06-06-2014, 07:01 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: Posted the wrong version of this yesterday. Think I deleted it OK. My apologies if this is a duplicate.
Days End
Any decent war movie oughta make you sick to your stomach.
I'm still breathing 300 days in.
But I know the odds, and the ends.
He is coming quickly,
And I'm ashamed to close my eyes to the horror,
While I have them still,
To witness more.
I like the shortness of it. It makes me hold my breath as a I read it. I love the third line, " i know the odds COMMA and the ends. "

