Dear My Love, lazy edit

[QDeathstar]

My first edit on this one, tried to fix the first two lines..


Dear My Love,

Even though I have all your heart,
helplessly I fear us falling apart.
Although I might have made a mistake,
my only hope was that you'd wake.
We always said it would last forever,
frightening how sudden things seem to sever.
See your eyes are pale and grey,
gravely it seems you've slipped away.
Awkward to see you limb by limb,
loosely I remember removing them.
Though you'll fit nicely I'm quite sure,
shivering below my freezer's door,
do not knock is all I implore,
or finger by finger I'll settle the score.