06-06-2014, 07:02 AM
(06-06-2014, 06:33 AM)LorettaYoung Wrote:Hi loretta,(06-03-2014, 11:13 PM)tectak Wrote: You think that this is exploitation?
Who gives a fanny for your thoughts?
A working night a week will keep
the other wolves from other doors.
If you should moan that’s what I want;
it’s your needs, not mine, babe.
You think I want your masturbation?
I’m sure you do, the question is
how much can you afford to spray
before your wife will catch you out
or someone spots you from the street?
It’s your life, not mine, babe.
You think that I’m for liberation?
I’d fuck you for the freedom trip?
I drive a Porsche, my Red Ferrari
never leaves my walled estate;
you and others buy my miles.
It’s your debt, not mine, babe.
You think that you could do it for me?
Ah, let me guess, you’re Super-Man.
I might turn over, baby, try me.
Ask, I’ll show you what you want;
these tits of mine are Super-woman’s.
It’s your dream, not mine, babe.
You think that I’m an easy-rider?
Another Charlene, Trix or Jade?
Maybe you figure I’m excited
and all because you type real slow;
I just get bored, so up the ante.
It’s your time, not mine, babe.
You think that when the show is over
my life goes back to drugs and kids?
Think again, you pop-eyed lobster;
drop your tissue down the pan.
I’ve got it made, you see, I’m smarter;
next time ask for Vagina Dentata…babe.
tectak
2014
I was just wondering while reading again and wondering if you had considered putting babe, between' like "it's your time, babe, not mine; but not the last stanza. The old Dylan song "It Ai'nt Me Babe" was cropping up in my head. Best, Loretta
There was and is an inspiration for everything. The "babe" word is cynical by the poem's character as most of the satellite soft porn digital.channels are called "Babe..." something or other.
"It ain't me babe" was possibly my subliminal trigger. Well reasoned.
tectak
I always think of the wonderful song by John Prine called "Hello in there" whenever I see your name

