Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00002, blake,brownlie)

[tectak]

I like the way your protagonist speaks directly to the reader, and engages them with questions. It's just that attitude that made me uncomfortable by the end - I've missed the metaphor and stranded on the typing. I'm reading this as by a worker in a pay-for-chat adult site. By the final line I have the uneasy feeling that the whole poem was written to celebrate those final two lines. I like it though, it made me think. I do like the refrain, a sort of regathering after each stanza of thought.

Hi justm,
Thanks for your discomfort...that is indeed rewarding Yes, avatar Lingua in Maxillam, that's me. But you got that, didn't you?
Best,
tectak