Anapestic meter?
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(06-05-2014, 01:13 PM)milo Wrote:  
(06-05-2014, 12:03 PM)Qdeathstar Wrote:  The middle of the night was silent,
A whisper the sole sense in between
two sleeping lover's dreams left un-spoke
and the shame they both felt as they woke.

As the dew left a milky wet coat
on each blade of uncut morning grass,
they both started for home to forget
The mistakes they mistook for passion.
nope
*shakes fist*. Darn.


Could you all give me the best line of anapestic meter, and the line that is most off?
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Messages In This Thread
Anapestic meter? - by QDeathstar - 06-05-2014, 12:03 PM
RE: Anapestic meter? - by milo - 06-05-2014, 01:13 PM
RE: Anapestic meter? - by QDeathstar - 06-05-2014, 09:25 PM
RE: Anapestic meter? - by Brownlie - 06-05-2014, 03:12 PM
RE: Anapestic meter? - by ellajam - 06-05-2014, 09:37 PM
RE: Anapestic meter? - by abu nuwas - 06-06-2014, 02:12 AM
RE: Anapestic meter? - by Leanne - 06-06-2014, 04:15 AM
RE: Anapestic meter? - by abu nuwas - 06-06-2014, 08:05 AM



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