Blue Bird Revised Edit 1

[Brownlie]

Thanks for reading I'll make sure to return the favor when I get to a computer. I can definitely see where some of the problems arose. I attempted to argue with the blue bird poem by Bukowski, and then added Whitman Spenser and Milton references. I.e. the bird like collar refers to a long neck that was often compared as a fitting sign of gluttony. The hidden part refers to Bukowski and his hidden blue bird that seems to represent his gentler side, but I'm doing too much explaining here. The punctuation needs fixing and some other things need fixing. Thanks again. Still working through Spenser so I won't pretend to be an expert in that. Too old fashioned anyway.